Our final thriller film - SCRAP

Feedback and Evaluation

Good Points:

-Great sound in the car
-Good angles
-Good point of view shot
-Boot opening Shot
-Ending shot of shovel coming down is very effective
-Good use of props eg car, spade
-Good Shots of driving
-Nice use of probs
-ironic music for a killer

Points to improve:

-More sound
-too much driving
-music didn't fit
-music is odd
-a lot of driving around
-relay short clip of random music
-music doesn't fit dietetics
-some clips a bit too long
-sound need to be a lot smoother


Looking at the other groups and our evaluation sheet we had decided to change the beginning of our film, by having Jake (the driver) by being more of a rebel by having upbeat and rap music in the car instead of a mainstream chart song. Also, we are going to have him smoking in the car and being a more recognisable teenager.

Rough Cut

Our Ideas

Our thriller

The main story line is that there will be a car driving normally on the road and the radio will be playing, he will be going about his business in a normal way, stopping at McDonalds etc. After a while the driver pulls over and stops in a secluded area such as a graveyard or a forest and opens the boot of the car. Inside there will be a man tied up, the driver will pull the man out and torture him. Then the driver will take an envelope from the man and drive off. It will be shot during the day to create a more normal atmosphere.