Looking at the feedback and comments form others, we decided to change the first part of the film. The main reasons for this are that we thought it was plain, boring and long-winded until the twist happened. We have decided to make Jake (the driver) more of an extreme teenager by having him smoking a 'joint' in the car then having him shouting out the window at a girl which shows he is inconsiderate and does not care. After this we see him on the phone which shows he does not care about the law or the safety of himself and others. After this we see him fiddling round in the glove box whilst driving which is also a safety issue.
We also decided to delete the music we had originally which was Owl City-Fireflies and recorded in the car, songs which were on the car CD which meant they were listened to by teenagers because Jake is a teenager himself. The music we had was Young Money - Bedrock and Lil. Wayne - Mrs. Officer which are mainstream but teenagers will recognize these songs and relate to them.
We also deleted all of the McDonald's scenes because we believe this did not add anything to our film and was too tedious and plain. We decided to make it more interesting and less boring by having all of the features mentioned above.
We are extremely pleased with our final product and are much happier with this shooting than our last shooting we performed.
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